homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
To you, what is the most useful gadget? Answer in a few sentences.
I think the most useful gadget is a cell phone. We can\'t image without it because we always use our cell phone. In addition, we even work out with it nowadays.
Thank you Donna! Be safe too.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름] Ju!
I totally agree with you! A smartphone is not called \'smart\' for nothing. It has revolutionized our way of living and connected us to people exponentially more than ever.
You and I actually meet via a smart phone if we can. Well, thank you for your answer! It was very well explained and you thought very well of your sentences. Excellent job!
See you on Friday.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Thank you Donna! Be safe too.
We can\'t image without it because we always use our cell phone.
>> We can\'t image a day without it because we always use our cell phone.
In addition, we even work out with it nowadays.
>> Correct!
Thank you Donna! Be safe too.
>> Correct!
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