Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to study abroad.
Because I want to study English, I go to a country that uses English and learn it myself.
And I want to show the world to my daughter.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]! ^^
I believe you and your daughter would travel the world together~ ^^
I believe you and your daughter would travel the world together~ ^^
- T. Rina
1. I want to study abroad.
>> CORRECT!
2. Because I want to study English, I go to a country that uses English and learn it myself.
>> Because I want to study English, I will go to a country that uses English and learn it myself.
3. And I want to show the world to my daughter.
>> CORRECT!
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