homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is the best and the worst thing you saw or experienced when visiting the high school you wanted to enter?
I went to the high school that i want to go. so i was very satisfied with visiting high school. all the things were perfect, especially i really liked many rooms for students who want to study anytime. This experience made me study harder to go there.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Hannah!
Thank you for doing your homework. I really appreciate it! I am very happy that you enjoyed visiting the high school where you want to study. Good luck and study hard so that you can really enter this high school!
-T. Caitlyn
What is the best and the worst thing you saw or experienced when visiting the high school you wanted to enter?
>> CORRECT
I went to the high school that i want to go. so i was very satisfied with visiting high school.
I went to the high school that i want to go. so i was very satisfied with visiting high school.
>> I visited the high school where I want to study and I was very satisfied with it.
all the things were perfect, especially i really liked many rooms for students who want to study anytime.
>> Everything was perfect but my favorite is that there are plenty of rooms for students who wants to study.
This experience made me study harder to go there.
>> This experience motivated me to study harder so I can get accepted there.
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