homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
What gadget do you not use anymore? Answer in a few sentences.
When I was in middle school, I used to study with an electronic dictionary. But now I\'m not use it anymore because I have a smartphone. As we talked last time, The advent of smartphones changes our lives to the unimaginable convenience.
Keep safe too Donna! Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] Ju, good evening!
I have seen my students before use this technology. It looks looks like a calculator that has the word\'s meaning as well as it\'s Korean translation. It was very cool way back then.
Fast forward today, a smaller and a more handy smartphone does everything and functions in a way all technologies are combined.
Thank you for this smart answer! I wonder where your electronic dictionary is now. Anyway, I have simple suggestions. Please go over them well.
See you!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
But now I\'m not use it anymore because I have a smartphone.
>> But now I\'m not using it anymore because I have a smartphone.
As we talked last time, The advent of smartphones changes our lives to the unimaginable convenience.
>> As we discussed last time, the advent of smartphones changes our lives to the unimaginable conveniences.
Keep safe too Donna! Thank you.
Keep safe too Donna! Thank you.
>> Correct!
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