homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Are you good at apologizing when you have done something wrong? Answer in a few sentences.
Apologizing is essential in human relationships and shows the sincerity that strengthens the bond. So, when I have done something wrong, I try to express sorry feeling immediately as honestly as possible.
I\'ll fix the class\'s time for a while. If I could, I\'m going to move Pilates to another day.
Thank you Donna! Take care.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름] Ju!
Apologizing needs to be one of our skills as we are human beings born imperfect. Anyway, the message of yoiur answer is a very good one. We need sincerity and most importantly, our actions need to speak for our apology.
Thank you for the correct sentences below that made a very good paragraph. Don\'t worry about the schedule. It will be perfectly fine. Thank you so much for your effort and dedication always.
See you soon!
-T. Donna =)
Apologizing is essential in human relationships and shows the sincerity that strengthens the bond.
>> Correct!
Or: Apologizing is essential in human relationships and shows the sincerity that strengthens their bond.
So, when I have done something wrong, I try to express sorry feeling immediately as honestly as possible.
>> Correct!
Or: So, when I have done something wrong, I try to express my sorry feelings immediately as honestly as possible.
I\'ll fix the class\'s time for a while. If I could, I\'m going to move Pilates to another day.
>> Correct!
Thank you Donna! Take care.
>> Correct!
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