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2012-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Lorraine

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Im my opinion : We must give a job for old people. because recently old people is very health. but if they don't health, sons and daushters must look after them. because old people is our parents.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday Lisa!   Thank your for stating your opinion. Very well said.  How was your weekend? See you in our class later! ~Teacher Lorraine~   Im my opinion : >> My opinion is: We must give a job for old people. because recently old people is very health. >> We must give jobs to old people especially when they are healthy and are still capable to work. (Sentence Construction) but if they don\'t health, sons and daushters must look after them. because old people is our parents. >> In case they are not in good health, their sons and daughters must look after them because they are these children\'s parents.  (Sentence Construction)

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