homework
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Apology also means responsibility for self-actions. I want my boss to know the solution rather than superficial apology. I don\'t want his rage to affect to me so I take pity on him.
Thank you for concern about boss problem. Nevertheless, I\'m grateful that I can work. I beliebe I will have good oppurtunity.
See you Monday Donna!
강사 첨삭
Hello there again, [이름] Ju!
Boss problems are tough because you have to work with them all the time. I hope someday, you will find the boss that best suits you. Better yet, be the boss of your own company. I like the later and I am sure you can be one soon!
So, thank you for this immediate homework. You made so many correct sentences and I am so proud of your progress. Enjoy your weekend too!
Stay safe always.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: Apology also means responsibility for one\'s self-actions.
Thank you for concern about boss problem.
I want my boss to know the solution rather than superficial apology.
>> Correct!
I don\'t want his rage to affect to me so I take pity on him.
>> I don\'t want his rage to affect me so I take pity on him.
Thank you for concern about boss problem.
>> Thank you for your concern about our boss problem.
Nevertheless, I\'m grateful that I can work.
>> Correct!
I beliebe I will have good oppurtunity.
>> I belive I will have good opportunities.
See you Monday Donna!
See you Monday Donna!
>> Correct!
Or: See you on Monday, Donna!
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