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I always trying to have fixed amounts and have meal on time. And I stretch all the time ! And I like to walk around. So I walk a short distance. This is how I keep my health.
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Hi, [이름]!
Oh, that is certainly good for you! It\'s good to know that at a young age you try to manage your health well. Keep it up!
Thank you and see you later!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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I always trying to have fixed amounts and have meal on time.
>>I always try to have fixed amounts and have a meal on time.
And I stretch all the time ! And I like to walk around.
>> And I stretch all the time and I like to walk around.
So I walk a short distance.
>> Correct!
This is how I keep my health.
>> Correct!
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