homework
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What do you think is the biggest problem your country is facing? Explain your answer.
It is employment difficulty. There are a lot of young people who can\'t get a job after graduation. So I\'m worried about employment. That\'s why I have to study hard.
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This is a serious problem that\'s why there are many people who consider going to another country instead to work.
It is employment difficulty.
>> I think the biggest problem in our country is employment.
There are a lot of young people who can\'t get a job after graduation.
>> CORRECT
So I\'m worried about employment.
>> I\'m worried about this that\'s why I have to study hard.
That\'s why I have to study hard.
>>CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
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