homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
What was the most beautiful place you have ever seen? Answer in a few sentences.
Yufuin in the south of Japan was the most beautiful and peaceful place I have ever been. there have breathtaking mountain, streams and cozy onsens which are making people relax and delight. I could enjoy the unique country sight of Japan.
Have a fine evening Donna, Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hello there again, [이름] Ju!
Thank you for sharing this wondrous place. It is so calm and peaceful. Someday, I hope to reach this destination too.
By the way, may I ask about the word \"onsens\"? Tell me about on Wednesday.
Have a relaxing evening!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
there have breathtaking mountain, streams and cozy onsens which are making people relax and delight.
>> There, we can see breathtaking mountains, streams and cozy insense which make people relaxed and delighted.
I could enjoy the unique country sight of Japan.
>> Correct!
Have a fine evening Donna, Thank you.
Have a fine evening Donna, Thank you.
>> Correct!
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