homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) If you COME with me, I will do the shopping with you.
2) Walter will help his mother in the garden if she READS him a story this evening.
3) If it will rain, I WILL STAY at home.
4) Our teacher WILL BE happy if we learn the poem by heart.
5) If they HAD enough money, they could buy a new car.
I got a cold last Friday.
I don't like taking a medicine.but I have no choice.I took a medicine.
And I went to work next day.
I felt very s[이름]py all day.
After work, I wanted to go to the bookstore.
I wondered what the new book published.
I went there, but I was very tired.
I read a book on the bookstore and I felt more s[이름]py.
I had to go home. When I arrived at home, I knocked out.
I slept at 4 pm and I woke next day 8 am.
I slept as much as for 14 hours.
Fortunately, I get better. but the day just passed to do nothing.
I guess it's a cause of the medicine that I spent a vain weekend.
I don't want to take medicine again.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name], thank you so much for making your homework and as usual, job well done!!
I\'m so glad to hear that you got better now, and I\'m sorry as well for knowing that you had a lame weekend, I think it was because of the medicine you took. But that\'s okay my dear.. the good thing here is that you got better!^^Thank you once again and see you later Miss. [Name]..
Teacher Cam^^
1) If you COME with me, I will do the shopping with you.
>>correct2) Walter will help his mother in the garden if she READS him a story this evening.
>>correct3) If it will rain, I WILL STAY at home.
>>correct4) Our teacher WILL BE happy if we learn the poem by heart.
>>correct5) If they HAD enough money, they could buy a new car.>>correctI got a cold last Friday.
>>correctI don\'t like taking a medicine.but I have no choice.I took a medicine.
>>correctAnd I went to work next day.
>>correctI felt very s[이름]py all day.
>>correctAfter work, I wanted to go to the bookstore.
>>correctI wondered what the new book published.
>>I wondered what books are already published.I went there, but I was very tired.
>>correctI read a book on the bookstore and I felt more s[이름]py.
>>correctI had to go home. When I arrived at home, I knocked out.
>>I had to go home and when I arrived home, I was koncked out.^^I slept at 4 pm and I woke next day 8 am.
>>I slept at 4 pm and woke up the next day 8 am.I slept as much as for 14 hours.
>>I slept for as long as 14 hours.Fortunately, I get better. but the day just passed to do nothing.
>>Fortunately I got better but the day passed without me doing anything.I guess it\'s a cause of the medicine that I spent a vain weekend.
>>I think spending lame weekend was all because of the medicine that I took.I don\'t want to take medicine again.
>>correct
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