homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Which is better, borrowing something or buying your own (For example, a car, house, etc.)? Answer in a few sentences.
There are different advantages. What I get own is to give me a sense of stability and satisfaction. on the other hand, Borrowing is not always bad. We can use wisely by leverage.
I think I should pay more attention to preparation and review to improve my English skills. Can you give me a tip on this?
Thank you always.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] Ju!
Owning gives us pride and satisfaction as you have said. Depending on our purpose, we can always borrow something that we do not need to use for a long time.
Anyway, as you have requested, we can review and preprare you more by trying to:
1.) Going over your mistake in your sentences written on your homework
2.) Studying your previous sentences and explain more grammar rules and patterns.
3.) Have a pronunciation drill at the start of the class.
Hence, let\'s do this on Wednesday. Thank you for your honestly and hard work all the time. See you then!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
What I get own is to give me a sense of stability and satisfaction.
>> What I get my own, it gives me a sense of stability and satisfaction.
on the other hand, Borrowing is not always bad.
>> Correct!
Or: On the other hand, borrowing is not always bad.
We can use wisely by leverage.
>> We can use something wisely by leverage.
I think I should pay more attention to preparation and review to improve my English skills.
I think I should pay more attention to preparation and review to improve my English skills.
>> Correct!
Can you give me a tip on this?
>> Correct!
Thank you always.
Thank you always.
>> Correct!
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