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Today was my firstday of video English class. And I was little bit worried because I can\'t speak English well. So I took first time of class this feeling. But more than I thought, English class was so funny and interesting. Sharon teacher was very cheerful, and video class was very fresh. I think my new English class is very nice
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
Thank you for your composition today.
It\'s a good effort.
Please take note of the suggestions below.
If you have any questions, fee free to ask in our class.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Today was my firstday of video English class.
>> Today was my first day of video English class.
And I was little bit worried because I can\'t speak English well.
>> I was a little bit worried because I can\'t speak English well.
So I took first time of class this feeling.
>> So, this is how I felt during the first class.
But more than I thought, English class was so funny and interesting.
>> However, the more I thought about it, my English class was fun and interesting.
Sharon teacher was very cheerful, and video class was very fresh.
>> Teacher Sharon was very cheerful and the video class was very fresh.
I think my new English class is very nice.
>> Correct
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