homework
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what i most hate tratis from other people is distract my concentration.
for example, even they know that i\'m studying, they talk to me or get loudly to conversation.
i think concentration is not always permission situation to me, so that i\'m value to concentration.
and i never talk to someone who concentrate something.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jumi!
Thank you for sharing your answer with me. I hope people will not disturb you when you\'re busy.^^
See you later!
~Teacher ERIN
what i most hate tratis from other people is distract my concentration.
>>The trait that I hate the most from people is when they distract my concentration.
for example, even they know that i\'m studying, they talk to me or get loudly to conversation.
>>For example, even though they already know that I\'m studying they are still talking to me, and sometimes they are talking with someone loudly.
i think concentration is not always permission situation to me, so that i\'m value to concentration.
>>I think concentration is very important for me, so I always need to concentrate.
and i never talk to someone who concentrate something.
>>I never talk to someone who concentrates on doing something.
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