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I think stove is dangerous in my home.
Because It is fire. We need to careful to i don\'t get burned. I am still scared of stove.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing about that. Always keep safe at home.
Have a good night!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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I think stove is dangerous in my home. Because It is fire.
>> I think the stove is dangerous in my home because it can cause a fire.
We need to careful to i don\'t get burned.
>> We need to be careful not to get burned.
I am still scared of stove.
>> I am still scared of the stove.
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