homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Did you ever go on a business trip? Share your answer in a few sentences.
Unfortunately, I\'ve never been on a business trip. I want to go on a business trip in the future in order to acquire more experience and knowledge. I don\'t know well that I haven\'t experienced it. But it will be a big opportunity.
I learned a lot today. I always respect your kindness and positive energy.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름] Ju!
I hope that you can be on a business trip soon. It may mean like a seminar, conference or anything to make your working skills even more incredible. These will all be possible soon. If not in your current company, your next one.^^
Thank you for all of these correct sentences. It doesn\'t matter that they are short. If they are correct, they become so effective and meaningful.
Excellent job! Happy weekend!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
I want to go on a business trip in the future in order to acquire more experience and knowledge.
>> Correct!
I don\'t know well that I haven\'t experienced it.
>> Correct!
But it will be a big opportunity.
>> Correct!
I learned a lot today.
>> Correct!
I learned a lot today.
>> Correct!
I always respect your kindness and positive energy.
>> Correct!
Thank you!
Thank you!
>> Correct!
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