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I know about pretty many disaster, and I most afraid of typhoon. First, disasters which I know about its are typhoon, tsunami, earthquake, volcano eruption, flood, and drought. Then most scary disaster to me is typhoon. Because volcano eruption and tsunami, like this disaster I feel those are so far to me. But typhoon is we can experience more easier. Also if typhoon come to me, I can’t operate my body. Therefore, I most afraid of typhoon.
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I know about pretty many disaster, and I most afraid of typhoon.
>> I know about many disasters, and I am most afraid of typhoons.
First, disasters which I know about its are typhoon, tsunami, earthquake, volcano eruption, flood, and drought.
>> First, disasters which I know about are typhoons, tsunami, earthquakes, volcanic eruptions, floods, and drought.
Then most scary disaster to me is typhoon.
>> The scariest disaster for me are typhoons.
Because volcano eruption and tsunami, like this disaster I feel those are so far to me.
>> It\'s because volcanic eruptions and tsunami don\'t really happen in my country.
But typhoon is we can experience more easier.
>> However, typhoons are very common in my country.
Also if typhoon come to me, I can’t operate my body.
>> Also, if typhoons come, my body can\'t function well.
Therefore, I most afraid of typhoon.
>> Therefore, I\'m most afraid of typhoons.
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