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2022-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Roanne

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When I was young I hate coke. Because baby teeth is very weack, so I dreak coke, and my teeth was so hurt. But now I love coke. But it is not good for health.....

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Oh, I see. It\'s really delicious, but it\'s not healthy. So, don\'t drink it all the time.

Have a fun weekend!

~T. Roanne ^_^

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When I was young I hate coke.

>> Correct! OR When I was young I hate drinking Coke.
Because baby teeth is very weack, so I dreak coke, and my teeth was so hurt.

>> Because the baby teeth are very weak, so If I drank coke, my teeth were so hurt.
But now I love coke. But it is not good for health.....

>> Correct! OR But now I love drinking Coke, but it is not good for health.

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