Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. What one quality in your people affects you?
My coworkers love their family, they try to spend almost of the time of weekend with their family.
They can do anything for their family.
2. Do you believe in innovation?
I believe the power of innovation. I think one of the most important thing for the company is an innovation, we can find a good example in Steve Jobs\'s innovation for Apple.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Chris! Happy Monday!
Thank you for sharing your answers with me. You did great!
See you later in class. ^^
~Teacher ERIN
1. What one quality in your people affects you?
My coworkers love their family, they try to spend almost of the time of weekend with their family.
>>My coworkers love their families, they try to spend most of their time with their family during weekends.
They can do anything for their family.
>>CORRECT
2. Do you believe in innovation?
I believe the power of innovation.
>>I believe in the power of innovation.
I think one of the most important thing for the company is an innovation,
>>I think, one of the most important things for a company is innovation.
We can find a good example in Steve Jobs\'s innovation for Apple.
>>CORRECT
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