homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
What is your favorite workout and why? Share your answer in a few sentences.
My favorite workout is absolutely Pilates. It is good to raise core power and to correct my body shape. I have enjoyed Pilates long ago. It\'s been half a year.
Thank you Donna! See you on Wednesday.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름] Ju!
You were awesome in class today! Moreover, you sent this so early, congratulations! I guess you have told me that pilates keeps you active and fit. So this week, workout and feel more energized!
Thank you so much as well for all of your great efforts in speaking in class as well as doing your homework.
See you then!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
It is good to raise core power and to correct my body shape.
>> Correct!
I have enjoyed Pilates long ago. It\'s been half a year.
>> Correct!
Thank you Donna! See you on Wednesday.
>> Correct!
Thank you Donna! See you on Wednesday.
>> Correct!
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