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학생이 쓴 원문
I think fashion is important.
Because I think decorating is polite to other people.
And fashion can express another me.
So I think fashion is important.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Grace!
I totally agree with you~ ^^
Thank you for this.
- T. Rina
1. I think fashion is important.
>> CORRECT!
2. Because I think decorating is polite to other people.
>> Because I think that looking good in front of other people is polite.
3. And fashion can express another me.
>> And I can express myself with fashion.
4. So I think fashion is important.
>> CORRECT!
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