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I think I eat well balanced diet. I eat breakfast before I go to the school. Also I eat many fruits for breakfast. My favorite fruits are orange, strawberry, and shine musket. Then I go to the school, and I eat school meals. Nutritionist make well balanced meals. Finally, I eat dinner each thing I want. Commonly I eat [이름]chi fried rice and tteak bok it. Therefore I eat well balanced diet every day. However I eat dinner at very late time because of academy, so I think for this problem my health is little bit bad.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
I think I eat well balanced diet.
>> I think I eat a well-balanced diet.
I eat breakfast before I go to the school.
>> I eat breakfast before I go to school.
Also I eat many fruits for breakfast.
>> Also, I eat many kinds of fruits for breakfast.
My favorite fruits are orange, strawberry, and shine musket.
>> My favorite fruits are orange, strawberry, and shine musket.
Then I go to the school, and I eat school meals.
>> Then I go to school and I eat school meals.
Nutritionist make well balanced meals.
>> Nutritionists advise us to eat well-balanced meals.
Finally, I eat dinner each thing I want.
>> Finally, I eat whatever I want for dinner.
Commonly I eat [이름]chi fried rice and tteak bok it.
>> Commonly, I eat [이름]chi fried rice and tteok bbok ki.
Therefore I eat well balanced diet every day.
>> Therefore I eat a well-balanced diet every day.
However I eat dinner at very late time because of academy, so I think for this problem my health is little bit bad.
>> However, I eat dinner at a very late time because of my academy, so I think this has a bad effect on my health.
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