homework
학생이 쓴 원문
My busiest day in the week is Friday.
After school at 1:30PM,my essay private lesson teacher come to my house for improve my writing skills.
Next,at 3:00PM,I go to the bungee academy.
Last,I study with you at 5:00PM.
Friday is fun but busy day.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Grace! ^^
Thank you for sharing this with me. ^^
You have made good sentences.
Thank you for sharing this with me. ^^
You have made good sentences.
Keep it up!
- T. Rina ^^
1. My busiest day in the week is Friday.
>> CORRECT!
2. After school at 1:30PM,my essay private lesson teacher come to my house for improve my writing skills.
>> After school at 1:30 P.M., my private essay teacher comes to my house to help me improve my writing skills.
3. Next,at 3:00PM,I go to the bungee academy.
>> Next, at 3:00 P.M., I go to the bungee academy.
OR: Then at 3:00 P.M., I go to the bungee academy.
4. Last,I study with you at 5:00PM.
>> Lastly, I study with you at 5:00 P.M.
5. Friday is fun but busy day.
>> Friday is a fun but busy day.
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