homework
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HOMEWORK:
What is your plan to be healthier this year? Answer in a few sentences.
My goal this year is to make good habits as well for strong mind and body. The things are working out regularly, eating healthier and getting up early in the morning. As you said, the healthier we are, the longer and happier our lives.
Thank you Donna. Take care!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] Ju!
This sounds like a great plan to be more fit and healthy. If we can be more disciplined, we can yield better results for our health and also influence others around us to do the same.
I support you with your goals. Thank you for doing so well on this homework!
You are always welcome, [이름] Ju! Take care this day.
-T. Donna =)
>> My goal this year is to make good habits for a stronger mind and body.
The things are working out regularly, eating healthier and getting up early in the morning.
>> These things are working out regularly, eating healthier, and getting up early in the morning.
As you said, the healthier we are, the longer and happier our lives.
>> As you said, the healthier we are, the longer and happier our lives are.
Thank you Donna. Take care!
Thank you Donna. Take care!
>> Correct!
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