homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the Busan Haundae beach is the most interesting place.
Because the scenery is very nice.
And the water is very cool.
So I like this place.
I want to see you here.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Grace! ^^
Thank you so much for this~
Thank you so much for this~
- T. Rina
1. I think the Busan Haundae beach is the most interesting place.
>> I think the most interesting place in Busan is Haeundae Beach.
2. Because the scenery is very nice.
>> CORRECT!
3. And the water is very cool.
>> CORRECT!
4. So I like this place.
>> CORRECT!
5. I want to see you here.
>> CORRECT!
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