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The best movie for me is [이름]ions. When I was a elementary school student, I saw that movie first time. After I saw this movie, [이름]ions became my best movie. The reason why I like [이름]ions movie is I like [이름]ion’s charm. I think [이름]ion’s best charm points are their dumb actions and their song. [이름]ions don’t use language, they just use reaction and talk together. [이름]ions are generally dumb, but some [이름]ions are specially dumb. That [이름]ions make situations more funny. Also, I like [이름]ion’s song. There is some scene [이름]ions sing a song and fight with guard. That song is so addictive. The lyric is repeated. Therefore, my best movie is [이름]ions because of [이름]ion’s dumb actions and their song. Above all, [이름]ions are cute.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
You just have a gift that no one lese has.
I hope you can cultivate and grow more.
I believe in you so much.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The best movie for me is [이름]ions.
>> The best movie for me is \"[이름]ions.\"
When I was a elementary school student, I saw that movie first time.
>> When I was an elementary school student, I saw that movie for the first time.
After I saw this movie, [이름]ions became my best movie.
>> After I saw this movie, \"[이름]ions\" became my favorite movie.
The reason why I like [이름]ions movie is I like [이름]ion’s charm.
>> The reason why I like the \"[이름]ions\" movie is I like the characters\' charm.
I think [이름]ion’s best charm points are their dumb actions and their song.
>> I think the [이름]ions\' most char[이름]g points are their dumb actions and their song.
[이름]ions don’t use language, they just use reaction and talk together.
>> They don’t use language because they just use expressions while talking to each other.
[이름]ions are generally dumb, but some [이름]ions are specially dumb.
>> Correct
That [이름]ions make situations more funny.
>> Correct
Also, I like [이름]ion’s song.
>> Also, I like the [이름]ions\' song.
There is some scene [이름]ions sing a song and fight with guard.
>> There is a scene where the [이름]ions were singing a song and fighting with a guard.
That song is so addictive.
>> That song was so addictive.
The lyric is repeated.
>> The lyrics were repetitive.
Therefore, my best movie is [이름]ions because of [이름]ion’s dumb actions and their song.
>> Therefore, the best movie for me is \"[이름]ions\" because of their dumb actions and their song.
Above all, [이름]ions are cute.
>> Correct
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