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학생이 쓴 원문
Sometimes I eat Cheongsimhwan. Cheongsimhwan is famous medicine in Korea. It makes calm heart.
But, when I can\'t eat it, I breath slowly and deeply.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for introducing this medicine to me, Emily! I wish you stay healthy!-Faith-
Sometimes I eat Cheongsimhwan. >> Sometimes, I eat Cheongsimhwan.
Cheongsimhwan is famous medicine in Korea.
>> Cheongsimhwan is a famous medicine in Korea.
It makes calm heart.
>> It makes the heart calm.
But, when I can\'t eat it, I breath slowly and deeply.
But, when I can\'t eat it, I breath slowly and deeply.
>> But, when I can\'t take it, I breathe slowly and deeply.
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