Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I wish I have writing talent. First, I can become a best writer and save money. If I got writing talent, I can become rich to write many books. If I got writing talent, I can write many genre’s books, so I am said genius writer. Also I can be very popular. Second, I think writing talent give many helps on school project. In school, we test ethics, English etc to writing. When We became a university students, we should write many essays. Therefore, writing talent can give many helps to me because I am a student! For this reasons, I wish I have writing talent.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
It\'s another week of writing to add to your cap.
You have done well.
I expect more improvement next week.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I wish I have writing talent.
>> I wish I have a talent for writing.
First, I can become a best writer and save money.
>> First, I can become the best writer and make a lot of money.
If I got writing talent, I can become rich to write many books.
>> If I have this talent, I can become rich from writing many books.
If I got writing talent, I can write many genre’s books, so I am said genius writer.
>> Also, if I have this talent, I can write many books from different genres, so I people can say that I\'m a genius writer.
Also I can be very popular.
>> Correct
Second, I think writing talent give many helps on school project.
>> Second, I think this talent give a lot of help on school projects.
In school, we test ethics, English etc to writing.
>> In school, we have tests on Ethics and others where we have to write.
When We became a university students, we should write many essays.
>> When we become university students, we should write many essays.
Therefore, writing talent can give many helps to me because I am a student!
>> Therefore, the talent for writing can give me a lot of help because I am a student!
For this reasons, I wish I have writing talent.
>> For these reasons, I wish I have a talent for writing.
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