homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Do you enjoy shopping for other people? Answer in a few sentences.
When my friends\' birthdays are coming up, I\'m shopping for them before one month. It is always difficult because I don\'t want let them down. So, I\'m careful when I choose a present.
Thank you Donna. Take care a new week!
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름] Ju!
You are very sweet and loving friend to prepare presents for your friends through shopping. I wonder if they give you gifts in return. Anyway, great job on your sentences below! Study my suggestions to the beginning and ending sentences.
Catch you soon!
-T. Donna =)
When my friends\' birthdays are coming up, I\'m shopping for them before one month.
>> When my friends\' birthdays are coming up, I\'m shopping for them one month before.
Or: When my friends\' birthdays are coming up, I\'m shopping for them a month before.
It is always difficult because I don\'t want let them down.
>> Correct!
So, I\'m careful when I choose a present.
>> Correct!
Thank you Donna.
Thank you Donna.
>> Correct!
Take care a new week!
>> Take care this new week!
>> Take care this new week!
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