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The hotel I visited with my parents last year was the best. The view of the hotel was a sea view. I couldn\'t s[이름]p because I was watching the night view of the sea. Because it was so pretty.
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Hello, Emily! You amazed me! Your sentences are mostly perfect!-Faith-
The hotel I visited with my parents last year was the best. >> CORRECT
The view of the hotel was a sea view.
>> CORRECT
OR That was a beachfront hotel.
I couldn\'t s[이름]p because I was watching the night view of the sea.
>> CORRECT
OR In fact, I enjoyed the night sea view that\'s why I didn\'t s[이름]p.
Because it was so pretty.
>> It was so pretty.
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