Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Two month ago, I went to Uljin sea. It is located in the east of Korea.
It takes about 3 hours to drive. At that time was weekday and there were not many cars on the road. So I drove the car speedily.
강사 첨삭
That must be fun, Emily! I would just like to explain that we need to spell out whole numbers below ten in a sentence. For example, \"It takes about three hours to drive\" instead of \"It takes about 3 hours to drive.\" It would be more formal. Thank you!-Faith-
Two month ago, I went to Uljin sea. >> Two months ago, I went to Uljin sea.
It is located in the east of Korea.
>> CORRECT
It takes about 3 hours to drive.
It takes about 3 hours to drive.
>> It takes about three hours to drive.
At that time was weekday and there were not many cars on the road. So I drove the car speedily.
>> That time was on a weekday and there were not many cars on the road, so I drove the car speedily.
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