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It is diet... when I was 4th grade I suscess my diet I was so happy but now I get fat.. so I need to diet again ... Let\'s diet !!!!
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Hi, [이름]!
It\'s okay. You are still young. Your body will change as you get older. Just enjoy the progress of your diet for now.
Thank you and have a nice day!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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It is diet...
>> It is my diet. OR The biggest challenge is my diet.
when I was 4th grade I suscess my diet I was so happy but now I get fat.. so I need to diet again ...
>> When I was in 4th grade I succeeded in my diet, I was so happy but now I gained weight, so I need to diet again.
Let\'s diet !!!!
>> Let\'s diet! OR Let\'s go on a diet!
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