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I eat out once third a month. Two times with friends and One time with my family, I eat out. And my favorite restaurant is Vincero in my city. The reason why this restaurant is my favorite is I love Vincero’s sweet potato pizza. That pizza is sweet potato pizza is sweet potato mousse on general tomato sauce with cheese pizza. Therefore, when I went Vincero, I always ate that pizza. And, when I eat out with friend, it is not a restaurant but we eat at ‘crazy tteok bok it’ Those tteok bok it sause is really spicy.
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Hi Bella!
You used simple sentences but they are on point.
That is what\'s good about your writing.
You can express your thoughts directly and that\'s what\'s important.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I eat out once third a month.
>> I eat out three times a month.
Two times with friends and One time with my family, I eat out.
>> I eat out two times with my friends and once with my family.
And my favorite restaurant is Vincero in my city.
>> My favorite restaurant is Vincero in my city.
The reason why this restaurant is my favorite is I love Vincero’s sweet potato pizza.
>> Correct
That pizza is sweet potato pizza is sweet potato mousse on general tomato sauce with cheese pizza.
>> That pizza is made with sweet potato mousse on general tomato sauce with cheese.
Therefore, when I went Vincero, I always ate that pizza.
>> Therefore, when I go to Vincero, I always eat that kind of pizza.
And, when I eat out with friend, it is not a restaurant but we eat at ‘crazy tteok bok it’
>> Also, when I eat out with a friend, it is not a restaurant but we eat at ‘crazy tteok bok it’
Those tteok bok it sause is really spicy.
>> The sauce they serve is really spicy.
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