Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Someone has been told lie to me. It’s my brother. I bought my snacks often and not ate all at once. Therefore, I left some snacks. But when I back home from academy, some snacks were gone. My brother ate that secretly. And I always guess someone who ate my food is brother but he always lied to me. Then, I found my snack’s wrapping paper. My snack’s wrapping paper is always in brother’s room. I found wrapping paper at my brother’s drawer or wastebasket.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
You have familiarized yourself with some new patterns.
They are very useful.
It\'s good you\'re thinking outside the box these days.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Someone has been told lie to me.
>> Someone lied to me.
It’s my brother.
>> Correct
I bought my snacks often and not ate all at once.
>> I buy snacks often but don\'t eat all of them at once.
Therefore, I left some snacks.
>> Therefore, I keep some of my snacks.
But when I back home from academy, some snacks were gone.
>> However, once when I went back home from the academy, some snacks were gone.
My brother ate that secretly.
>> My brother ate them secretly.
And I always guess someone who ate my food is brother but he always lied to me.
>> I could also guess that someone was eating my food and it was my brother but he always lied to me.
Then, I found my snack’s wrapping paper.
>> Then, once, I saw my snack’s wrapper.
My snack’s wrapping paper is always in brother’s room.
>> My snack’s wrappers were always in my brother’s room.
I found wrapping paper at my brother’s drawer or wastebasket.
>> I found wrappers in my brother’s drawer or wastebasket.
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