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I read books once on one week. Because I have reading academy. Before I go to that academy, I should read that week’s book. I don’t like books, but I don’t hate reading books. I think the way, make someone hate about reading books to like reading is recommend that person’s taste books. Like horror, romance, thriller, or comedy. I don’t like books either, but I like reading books when I read my taste’s book. Therefore, someone hate reading books is start reading books for that person’s taste genre and next try other books. I think this way can make good effect.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
What a fruitful week we had.
Let\'s be grateful for the improvements we have made.
Keep working hard and developing yourself.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I read books once on one week.
>> I read books once in one week.
Because I have reading academy.
>> It\'s because I go to a reading academy.
Before I go to that academy, I should read that week’s book.
>> Correct
I don’t like books, but I don’t hate reading books.
>> Correct
I think the way, make someone hate about reading books to like reading is recommend that person’s taste books.
>> I think the way to make a person who hates books like reading is to recommend something suitable to his or her taste.
Like horror, romance, thriller, or comedy.
>> It could be horror, romance, thriller, or comedy.
I don’t like books either, but I like reading books when I read my taste’s book.
>> I don’t like books either, but I like reading books when I read a story that I like.
Therefore, someone hate reading books is start reading books for that person’s taste genre and next try other books.
>> Therefore, someone who hates reading books can start reading ones he or she likes and then try reading other kinds of books.
I think this way can make good effect.
>> I think this way can lead to a good result.
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