homework
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HOMEWORK:
Which matters more to you: skill, appearance, or character? Answer in a few sentences.
character is the most important more than the others. I believe character is a container for the inside, so we can know the person through his personality. I think the other two things are incidental.
Have a powerful Monday, Donna!
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A powerful Monday indeed, ![이름] Ju!
It is true that appearance is the first thing we see in people with our eyes but as time goes by, character and skills make the person. At times, a person has all of these great attributes. We can always work hard to achieve any of these or all of them if we want to depending on how much we work hard for them.
Thank you so much once again and review my suggestions well.
Have a great night!
-T. Donna ~
>> Correct!
Or: Character is the most important thing more than the others.
I believe character is a container for the inside, so we can know the person through his personality.
>> Correct!
I think the other two things are incidental.
>> Correct!
Have a powerful Monday, Donna!
Have a powerful Monday, Donna!
>> Correct!
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