Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I don’t know about new researches. Therefore, I will just write my opinion that researches always lead to positive things. I think researches doesn’t always lead to positive things. Just they give some possibilities and negative effect. Sometime researches give positive things but not always. Researches give some happen’s possibility, too. Some researches are negative like Covid-19 and other viruses. They doesn’t always give positive things. Therefore, for these reasons I think researches doesn’t always lead to positive things.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
This is a good way to start the week.
I can see the effort that went into this work.
I hope you can maintain this level of excellence throughout the week.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I don’t know about new researches.
>> Correct
Therefore, I will just write my opinion that researches always lead to positive things.
>> Therefore, I will just write my opinion about researches always leading to positive things.
I think researches doesn’t always lead to positive things.
>> I think researches don\'t always lead to positive things.
Just they give some possibilities and negative effect.
>> They just give possibilities and negative effects.
Sometime researches give positive things but not always.
>> Sometimes, researches give positive things but not always.
Researches give some happen’s possibility, too.
>> Researches also make things happen.
Some researches are negative like Covid-19 and other viruses.
>> Some researches led to negative things like Covid-19 and other viruses.
They doesn’t always give positive things.
>> They don’t always give positive things.
Therefore, for these reasons I think researches doesn’t always lead to positive things.
>> Therefore, for these reasons, I think researches don’t always lead to positive things.
>> Therefore, for these reasons, I think researches don’t always lead to positive things.
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