homework
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HOMEWORK:
Which is better for you, buying or renting something? Answer in a few sentences.
It can be different depending on what situation it is or what it is. If I could afford to pay for everything, I could buy something. In the other hands, if I could pay all the expenses, I don\'t have to do that. Because borrowing can be better.
Thank you Donna! have a good evening!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] Ju! Good evening.
I absolutely agree with you that renting is more convenient than buying and vice versa depending on the condition and situation of a thing. Owning a house for example is very convenient in your own country and may not be in a foreign land when you have to stay for a short while. Meanwile, renting can be good for some activities we do for do every once in a while such as a car for an outing.
You made very good and correct sentences below. For the third one, study how I connected the last part of the sentence to make it a long one. Great job! Keep it up.
See you on Friday!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
If I could afford to pay for everything, I could buy something.
>> Correct!
>> Correct!
In the other hands, if I could pay all the expenses, I don\'t have to do that. Because borrowing can be better.
>> On the other hand, if I could pay all the expenses, I don\'t have to do that because borrowing can be better.
Thank you Donna! have a good evening!
Thank you Donna! have a good evening!
>> Correct!
Or: Have a good evening.
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