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Sometimes we are happy when we have a lot of money. But we aren\'t happy always, with money. So I think we can not buy happy wiih money.
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Hi, [이름]!
Oh, that\'s a good answer. At least, you know that it\'s not all about money that can make a person happy.
Thank you for sharing!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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Sometimes we are happy when we have a lot of money.
>> Correct! Or We feel happy when we have a lot of money.
But we aren\'t happy always, with money.
>> But we aren\'t always happy with money.
So I think we can not buy happy wiih money.
>> So I think we can not buy happiness with money.
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