Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning again, Donna!
First of all, I have a something to tell you.
I don\'t know why, many foreigners(for my standard, actually once a day) came to my clinic lately.
And I thought I speaked English more fluently since I studied English with you.
Thanks to you~!
Now I am gonna do my homework.
There are many kinds of transport such as train, subway, airplane, taxi and bus.
Among them, I like to take a train.
Train is comfortable and fast, especially KTX train is so fast.
It\'s more twice as fast as other trains.
Thus it\'s relatively expensive, but I think it\'s affordable because it can save my time.
Sometimes I took a taxi if I can\'t drive my car.
Meanwhile I don\'t like to take a bus and subway because they are always crowded.
Anyway, Do you know BMW?
Several years ago, many Korean used that word. (I am not sure we still use that word.)
It stands for Bus, Metro and Walk.
They are the most popular transport for going work in Korea.
And using them, we can go to most of places in Korea.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Dr. [이름]!
It is so interesting to know that more and more foreigners are going to your clinic for your services. I guess they feel very comfortable talking to a doctor who can communicate with them easily and that is you. Thank you for thinking that our methods and techniques of learner are very effective. However, I always tell my students that my role as their teacher is to motivate them to stay patient, keep a high interest, and being creative in speaking the English language. Thus, you owe it 85% most of the time if you improved in this language becaause you worked hard to be an effective speaker. May you have more foreigners coming through your door for your excellent medical expertise and easy communication skills.
For the homework part, BMW is a new term I have learned from you. There no doubt that your contry has one of the fastest and most efficient transportation systems in the world due to your land structure. In my country, this is tough to achieve with scattered islands. You have done so well on this homework. Thank you for your nonstop effort and hard work, they are highly appreciated.
Enjoy your lunch!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
First of all, I have a something to tell you.
>> Correct!
I don\'t know why, many foreigners(for my standard, actually once a day) came to my clinic lately.
>> Correct!
And I thought I speaked English more fluently since I studied English with you.
>> And I thought, I spoke English more fluently since I studied English with you.
Thanks to you~!
>> Correct!
Now I am gonna do my homework.
>> Correct!
Or: Now I am going to do my homework. (For a formal sentence composition for business purposes.)
There are many kinds of transport such as train, subway, airplane, taxi and bus.
>> Correct!
Or: There are many kinds of transport such as train, subway, airplane, taxi, and bus.
Among them, I like to take a train.
>> Among them, I like to take the train.
Train is comfortable and fast, especially KTX train is so fast.
>> Train is comfortable and fast, especially, the KTX train is so fast.
It\'s more twice as fast as other trains.
It\'s more twice as fast as other trains.
>> It\'s twice as fast as other trains.
Thus it\'s relatively expensive, but I think it\'s affordable because it can save my time.
Thus it\'s relatively expensive, but I think it\'s affordable because it can save my time.
>> Correct!
Sometimes I took a taxi if I can\'t drive my car.
>> Sometimes, I take a taxi if I can\'t drive my car.
Meanwhile I don\'t like to take a bus and subway because they are always crowded.
>> Correct!
Anyway, Do you know BMW?
>> Correct!
Several years ago, many Korean used that word. (I am not sure we still use that word.)
>> Several years ago, many Koreans used that word. (I am not sure if we still use that word.)
It stands for Bus, Metro and Walk.
>> Correct!
They are the most popular transport for going work in Korea.
>> They are the most popular transport for going to work in Korea.
And using them, we can go to most of places in Korea.
>> And using them, we can go to most of the places in Korea.
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