Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think 1919 year’s history is interest to me. On 1919, in Korea people insist their freedom from Japan. Koreans did Man-sae movement at March 3 1919. I think history make repeat me. Because, if at past, Koreans didn’t did movement that insist their country’s freedom, I can be do[이름]ated from Japan. Today I came back home later so, I couldn’t wrote long story sorry.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
It\'s important to understand how certain expressions are used in sentences.
Take note of the suggestions below.
These are instances when specific terms could be used best.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think 1919 year’s history is interest to me.
>> I think 1919 was an interesting part of history for me.
On 1919, in Korea people insist their freedom from Japan.
>> In 1919, Korea fought for freedom from Japan.
Koreans did Man-sae movement at March 3 1919. I think history make repeat me.
>> Koreans created the Man-sae movement on March 3, 1919.
I think history make repeat me.
>> I think history repeats itself.
Because, if at past, Koreans didn’t did movement that insist their country’s freedom, I can be do[이름]ated from Japan.
>> It\'s because in the past, if Koreans didn’t start the movement to win their freedom, I would experience the do[이름]ation of Japan.
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