Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I spend time with my father a little bit. I think me and father as close as other people. Me and father spend time for shopping. In my family, my taste resemble father’s taste the most. Therefore, we go to the mart and go to shopping mall together. We like chocolate, jelly, and Nike brand. But me and father don’t like a best friend. Because, for my father rules are very important. Father hates rude people. He hate something messy, either so he always say to me clean your room.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
I spend time with my father a little bit.
>> I spend a little bit of my time with my father.
I think me and father as close as other people.
>> I think my father and I are as close as other people.
Me and father spend time for shopping.
>> My father and I go shopping together.
In my family, my taste resemble father’s taste the most.
>> In my family, my taste matches my father’s taste the most.
Therefore, we go to the mart and go to shopping mall together.
>> Therefore, we go to the mart and go to shopping malls together.
We like chocolate, jelly, and Nike brand.
>> We like chocolate, jelly, and the Nike brand.
But me and father don’t like a best friend.
>> However, my father and I are not like best friends.
Because, for my father rules are very important.
>> It\'s because my father\'s rules are very important.
Father hates rude people.
>> My father hates rude people.
He hate something messy, either so he always say to me clean your room.
>> He hates anything messy either so he always tells me to clean my room.
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