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2012-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) My friend is good at playing volleyball. 2) She complains about bullying. 3) They are afraid of losing the match. 4) She doesn't feel like working on the computer. 5) We are looking forward to going out at the weekend. I went the cultural center for my flute lesson yesterday. There is a class of flute on every Tuesday. I like sound of flute but I can't play it well. I have been learning a flute for a year. It's difficult for me to handle. These days, I practiced Gariboldi's etude and classic what my teacher collected for my level. I practiced Badinerie by Bach yesterday. That's difficult to play so I practiced longer than usual. I hope that I will be able to play the flute for someone someday.

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear, thank you once again for making your homework.. Job well done ofcourse!! DOn\'t worry about playing the flute my dear, I know someday you\'re gonna get better. Just believe in yourself Miss. [Name] okay.. Talk to you later Miss. [Name].. Teacher Cam^^ 1) My friend is good at playing volleyball. >>correct2) She complains about bullying. >>correct3) They are afraid of losing the match.  >>correct4) She doesn\'t feel like working on the computer. >>correct5) We are looking forward to going out at the weekend.>>correctI went the cultural center for my flute lesson yesterday. >>I went to the cultural center for my flute lesson yesterday.There is a class of flute on every Tuesday. >>I have a flute class every Tuesday.I like sound of flute but I can\'t play it well. >>I like the sound of a flute but I can\'t play it well.I have been learning a flute for a year.>>correctIt\'s difficult for me to handle. >>correctThese days, I practiced Gariboldi\'s etude and classic what my teacher collected for my level. >>These days, I practice Gariboldi\'s etude and some clssical songs collected by my teacher for my level.I practiced Badinerie by Bach yesterday.>>correctThat\'s difficult to play so I practiced longer than usual. >>correctI hope that I will be able to play the flute for someone someday.  >>correct  

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