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학생이 쓴 원문
I think joining the hobby club is the most common ways of meeting partners. Korea have many activity clubs. Typical examples are exercise club. I hope join the exercise club. But I always busy. Because I take a lesson the violin every weekend.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Emily! I also agree with you that joining a club is good. I hope you can find time to finally enjoy it.-Faith-
I think joining the hobby club is the most common ways of meeting partners. >> I think that joining a hobby club is the most common way of meeting partners.
Korea have many activity clubs.
>> Korea has many activity clubs.
Typical examples are exercise club.
>> Typical examples are exercise clubs.
I hope join the exercise club. But I always busy. Because I take a lesson the violin every weekend.
>> I hope to join the exercise club, but I am always busy because I take a violin lesson every weekend.
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