Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I like my room. Because it is my privacy place.
And its smell is very good. I don\'t know what smell is that but It is puzzy and I like it.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Oh, that is nice! I agree that our room is where we feel more comfortable.
Thank you for sharing!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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I like my room. Because it is my privacy place.
>> I like my room because it is my privacy place.
And its smell is very good.
And its smell is very good.
>> Correct!
I don\'t know what smell is that but It is puzzy and I like it.
>> I don\'t know what the smell is, but it is fuzzy and I like it.
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