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I think the most rude action is don’t listen other person’s opinion. I think listen carefully other person’s talk or opinion is very important to everyone. Also I hate slight other people, either. I think if other persons’s talking is bored and not funny, but we should listen carefully their opinion. Because, if we slight that person, he or she doesn’t feel good. Look like hate that person, either. Therefore I think the most rude action is slight other person’s opinion.
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Hi Bella!
You explained that really well.
Your expository style of writing is getting better by the day.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think the most rude action is don’t listen other person’s opinion.
>> I think the rudest action is not listening to other people\'s opinions.
I think listen carefully other person’s talk or opinion is very important to everyone.
>> I think listening carefully to what other people say or opinion is very important to everyone.
Also I hate slight other people, either.
>> I also hate slighting other people.
I think if other persons’s talking is bored and not funny, but we should listen carefully their opinion.
>> I think other people are boring, we should still listen carefully to their opinion.
Because, if we slight that person, he or she doesn’t feel good.
>> It\'s because if we slight a person, he or she doesn’t feel good.
Look like hate that person, either.
>> It would look like others hate the person, too.
Therefore I think the most rude action is slight other person’s opinion.
>> Therefore, I think the rudest action is slighting other people.
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