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2012-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 karen

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Writing homework - Make a composition answering the following question: If you were given the chance to change any mistake you made in the past, what would you change and why? ==================================================================== When I was young, Enlgish was very difficult me. But I was good at maths, and then I didn't know that English is going to be very important for my life.Also I studied maths harder and I didn't study English harder than the other materials. But I know that English is very important for my life.Because I am living abroad so there are many times that when I have to talk English. So if I can change my mistake,I would study harder English. ===================================================================== Hi Karen~! I have a question. I walked hom after the party last night. (=all the way, completely) In sentences,what meaning is the "all the way" ?

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! Thanks for your wonderful composition. People say that we should use our mistakes as lessons to learn so that we will not commit the same mistake again. In your case, I do believe you have learned a lot, I can definitely feel the sincere passion and effort your are exerting in learning English ^^. I encourage you to keep on making more compositions. I would be very glad to read them. Have a great day today! ^.^ I'll call you again soon.

P.S. Thank you for your question. I already explained it below. If you have further inquiries just ask away! ^__^

~t.Karen >.<

Writing homework - Make a composition answering the following question: If you were given the chance to change any mistake you made in the past, what would you change and why?

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 When I was young, Enlgish was very difficult me.

>> **Please consider adding your preposition 'for'.

>> ** Be careful with your spelling when typing English words: 'English'.

>> When I was young, for me English was very difficult.

But I was good at maths, and then I didn\'t know that English is going to be very important for my life.

>> ** Use 'Math' since you are talking about just one subject.

>> ** You should say 'WAS going to be

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