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My anwser are : If people watch computer screens all day, their eyesight will getting worse. they also will stoop, because all day they sitting inan chair.
And they will become lonely, because all day home alone. They don't talk to people. Maybe I think that they are got the blues.
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T. Lorraine
My anwser are : If people watch computer screens all day, their eyesight will getting worse.
>>My answers are: If people watch on the computer all day, their eyesight will get worse.they also will stoop, because all day they sitting inan chair.
>>They will also stoop, because they are sitting on a chair all day.
And they will become lonely, because all day home alone.
>> And they will become lonely, because they're home all day, alone.
They don\'t talk to people.
>> Correct.
Maybe I think that they are got the blues.
>>Maybe. I'll think they'll have the blues.
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