Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I have been afraid to give my opinion. In school, my friends and I play together like a group. Sometimes, my opinion is different to every one. Only I have another opinion. At that time, I’m afraid of give my opinion. Because, I can be refused from them and I can make them uncomfortable. Someone has been give their opinion what I don’t want, either. In group project, some classmate make work (which he or she doesn’t like to do) to other person. They only want the easy way
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
This is some good story-telling skills you have here.
This is the narrative style of writing.
I\'ll give you more pointers in class.
We can make your statements more effective.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I have been afraid to give my opinion.
>> Correct
In school, my friends and I play together like a group.
>> In school, my friends and I play together in a group.
Sometimes, my opinion is different to every one.
>> Sometimes, my opinion is different from everyone else.
Only I have another opinion.
>> I alone have a different opinion.
At that time, I’m afraid of give my opinion.
>> At that time, I was afraid of giving my opinion.
Because, I can be refused from them and I can make them uncomfortable.
>> It\'s because they might not accept my opinion and they might feel uncomfortable because of me.
Someone has been give their opinion what I don’t want, either.
>> Someone once gave an opinion that I didn\'t want.
In group project, some classmate make work (which he or she doesn’t like to do) to other person.
>> In a group project, some classmates pass the work that they don\'t like to do to another person.
They only want the easy way
>> Correct
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