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2022-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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I mentioned about it a little bit last class. I like big and angular car. Soft appearace is not my preference. I want my car to look strong and heavy. If I find my dream car in actuall model, Jeep wrangler rubicon is smilar to my dream car. But it\'s price 60millions won. It ia too expensive. So I will buy it when I win the first prize at lotto.

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Hi, [이름]y!

I am amazed by your dream car. I can really see that you like big cars,

-T. Caitlyn

I mentioned about it a little bit last class.

>> I mentioned a little about it in our last class.
I like big and angular car.

>> I like big and angular cars.

Soft appearace is not my preference.

>> Small cars are not my preference.

I want my car to look strong and heavy.

>> CORRECT
If I find my dream car in actuall model, Jeep wrangler rubicon is smilar to my dream car. But it\'s price 60millions

won.

>> If I can compare my dream car to an actual model, it will be the Jeep Wrangler Rubicon with a price of 60 million won.

It ia too expensive. So I will buy it when I win the first prize at lotto.

>> It is too expensive so I can only buy it when I win the first lottery prize.

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